Suzi broke my heart a song

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Tuesday, 13-Jun-2006 9:22:31

Suzi broke my heart and she doesn't know how badly as she sits there gleaming in the moonlight,all silver and blue. Ohhh Suzi he may say he loves you but it's bull, without you beauty life is soo cruel, let us steal away now you can do the driving babe no you wont complain, your so easy to handle in the heavy summer rain. Ohh Suzi he may claim to love you but it's all bull, without you beauty life is soo cruel. Come away with me Suzi, quickly,as only you know how.

Post 2 by Perestroika (Her Swissness) on Wednesday, 14-Jun-2006 8:01:13

Awww, that's sweet, i really like the metaphore in the first few lines.

Post 3 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Wednesday, 14-Jun-2006 8:50:56

You dont get it

Post 4 by blbobby (Ooo you're gona like this!) on Wednesday, 14-Jun-2006 14:25:38

I think you did it: wrote a poem/song that's more funny than dark. Or, maybe I don't get it either.

Bob

Post 5 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Thursday, 15-Jun-2006 8:43:12

You get it but there is another side to Suzi, you have to solve it.

Post 6 by blbobby (Ooo you're gona like this!) on Thursday, 15-Jun-2006 12:23:04

No way. I'm not playing another game on the boards. *He rants and rants.* Maybe once I've had some coffee.